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it's always later than you thinksly lines are better left unsaideyes just get wetter when you blinkyou finger letters left unreadwhile cheap distractions fill your headit's always later than you...
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Interesting piece Ben....you must live in a rough town.. A work not unlike some of my older ones... >>>Wolf<<<........just....here
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Hard hitting quatern, Ben, in your face and slightly threatening....well done!The title is just perfect.Thanks.Sandra
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I agree...the title is perfect, and this is a powerful little write...enjoyed.sioux
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I loved this! Thanks for the good read -- Sherry Deanne
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Ben:I agree with Sioux... nicely done.R~ Robert Edward Levin is the author of the 1998 thriller, The Lizard and The Fly, The Glass Heart, a collection of short stories published in Sept. 2002, and...
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Well said, well written and a pleasure to read, I enjoy seeing the quatern form, and you have done it very well. Thank you for sharing it...jinx
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I love the flow, Ben! Your poetic voice is becoming crystal clear!Thespianna
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Ben, I really liked this...powerful and just filled with incredible imagery....DAMN fine work!!GaladrielThis is my simple religion. There is no need for temples; no need for complicated philosophy....
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you fine peoples know i don't often do curtain calls...but i owe you one here.big THANK YOUs to everyone for the kind and generous responses. this poem would not exist without the Maelstrom...without...
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Ben,you have impressed me yet again!Wonderful reminder of getting your butt home.
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Great write. I love your line, her eyes glows brake light red.Can relate,CT
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Oh yes, Ben - so very, very true!It flows so naturally - not a word out of place. Wondeerful.Davie
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